Embedding a Quote
      Sometimes called a Half-n-Half
     Many high school students would 
     agree that school uniforms can be 
     “detrimental to a student’s self-esteem 
     and a hindrance to their creativity” 
     (48).
        Which part belongs to the student? Which part belongs to the 
        author?
   Despite the many criticisms, uniforms 
   offer “comfort and continuity” and 
   allow students to “feel as if they fit in 
   with their peers” (75). 
         What to do and what not to do
  The following quote is from S.L. Rottman’s Hero.
   It’s the things you do in life, not the things you see.
   Page 80
   Said by: Mr. Hassler
   There are two things wrong with this. Can you find them?
              Here’s what I CAN’T do:
   It’s a floating quote – it’s just stuck in there.
   And there’s no . . . What?
   Mr. Hassler gave Sean a lot of good advice. “It’s the things 
   you do in life, not the things you see.”
                 So . . . How do I make that work?
       It’s the things you do in life, not the things you see.
       Page 80
       Said by: Mr. Hassler                 Quote Intro
       One of the many lessons Sean learned from 
       Mr. Hassler was that “it’s the things you do 
       in life, not the things you see” (90).
            How would you work in this quote?
   Page 90
   Mr. Hassler
   I’m your parent while you’re on my ranch
    
    
                  Here’s one idea:
                         Quote Intro
    Mr. Hassler went above and beyond the call 
    of duty when he told Sean, “I’m your parent 
    while you’re on my ranch” (90).